This is the MOST THROUGH REVIEW of this site you will find. Experience, essay evaluation, review of the site overall, and opinion. Ide encourage anyone reviewing the site and thinking about ordering to read this and share it for me as it will help others. Thank You. Grade: F Order#: 67996 Writer:Wolf 16929 I'am a college undergrad student at MIT and i have never done something like this, i did not even know this kind of thing existed. After going though the morals and ethics of this site and what i was about to do. I was left to no choice but to find a way to get help since i got myself into a 6 class admission this semester, which is something i can handle but it got to overwhelming and i just could not make it in TIME i had no choice my grade was at stake. Iam a full time student and i work tremendously hard at my school work day and night regardless of school or not. I did a though research of sites like this one and found alot and chose to try this one I paid $138!! which is a ton of money for an essay that was lacked EVERYTHING!!!My anger and frustration aside, i could not believe that a company that boasts on the fact that they have PROFESSIONAL writers, people that are EXPERTS in the field of your subject-class could write something like this!!! It is a complete and utter disrespect to the professor/s who read the essay, the intellectual persons who work hard in school tirelessly, making sure every assignment is absolutely perfect to ensure a successful FUTURE, grade by grade, and to the people who never got anything less than an A or B and have to resort to this and mess there grades up. I TRUSTED and RELIED on them based off what they said on their website. They have PROFESSIONAL writers, experts, people who KNOW HOW TO WRITE. But this was not the case at all, NOT EVEN CLOSE. I though i would have to adjust it because it would have been written on a professional "graduate" level but it was nothing close to that; it would be disrespectfully to even compare the two. I will analyze the essay entirely and point out some of the mistakes i found at first sight. Than a review of the overall site and my opinion. General overview of the essay first than a through break down of it: Essay has been written as though it was from first thought..there is no sense of effort and that is proven by the overall lack of and improper use of grammer, vocabulary, paragraph structure, sentence structure, transitions, punctuation, paragraph topic sentence, sentence flow from one to another, original thought, and understanding of assignment. There is no indication of what the paragraph or essay will be about, no clear indication of a thesis(no thesis). There are no use of transitions. There is no flow from one sentence to another, the sentences are jumping from one thing to another, there is no flow, no transition from sentence to sentence. And not only did this person not follow the rules of formal english and show that an educated, college degree, literate person that understands the topics and reading and equally important, knows how to WRITE AND STRUCTURE the essay but he/she did not meet the requirements of the assignment let along my requirements at all. There is no creative or descriptive expression in use of words. It is being written from first sight of assignment. Essay: I liked how it began with the first sentence but than, line by line, i realized just how poorly written it was and began to feel absolutely horrible, guilty, ashamed, and torn by the LACK OF LITERACY and thought that went into this. Intro: The second sentence already is a sentence fragment, improper use of the word "there", 2nd sentence should be a continues sentence, connecting it to the sentence coming after it. There is no thesis, which is typically, academically, accustomed to begin at the end of the paragraph; that should be clearly stated, indicating what the essay will be about. There are also several punctuation errors. 1st paragraph: There is no transition to introducing the text that is being used to support the statements being said. All information is from the reading assigned, there is no original thought, observation, understanding...etc of the topic sentence or in general; everything is from the text; This is considered PLAGERISM!!!. 2nd paragraph: Starts of with a quote, no paragraph topic sentence to indicate what the paragraph will be about, rather it is written off the cuff to full-fill the assignment topic; directly to the point. The paragraph has overall has not one sentence referring to any slave other than Douglas. It than talks about Douglass and his mistress, this is not what the assignment is about(talk about any slave other than Douglass), i made that very clear. Paragraph 3: Better alternative of the word "virtually" would have better suited the context. Again lack of understanding of the assignment, there is indication of Malcolm X but there is no CONTRACT to other text as the assignment stated. Paragraph 4: No topic sentence, no point being made. Just another idea from the reading being put onto the paper. Talks about Douglass and not slaves in general and the difficulties they had learning to read and write. The whole thing is full of a quote, no point being made. No transition. paragraph 5: Again Douglass. no point being made about slaves overall. This is entirely about the reading and Douglass. No topic sentence, no transition. Everything before and after the quote stated is from the reading, again this is considered plagiarism in case you did not know. Paragraph 6 : Along with the lack of information to be considered a paragraph, quote aside. This person talks about Malcolm x but there is no contrast to the other text. Paragraph 7: At this point im tired of writing, It talks about Douglass again and this is full of quotes and reference to Douglass's experience only!! It is again a direct copy of the reading. Also, improper use of the word "doesn't". The conclusion sums up just about everything this person copied and pointed out in each paragraph over and over again. Overall: There is no original knowledge, or information coming from the writer, as an indication of understanding of the reading and topic at hand. The whole essay comes from the information provided in the reading assigned. He/she is using the information from the reading and rewriting them in his//her own way in almost every sentence throughout without proper credit to the author. But in this case you might as well be citing the author in every sentence. The whole point of the essay is not to talk about Douglas and HIS difficulty reading and writing but slaves in general. The text is being cited over and over and over again. Everything is coming directly from the text in every single line and paragraph. It is a direct copy of the reading; there is no original thought or abstract understanding of the topic. This is a better summery of the two readings provided!! The writer also missed the fact that i said to include the MLA format entirely on the essay when citing, but there was non. The professors comment: "Off focus essay; assignment required discussion of the difficulties that ANY SLAVE (NOT DOUGLASS) might have had learning to read and write and contrasting that text, in addition, to the other text of Malcolm X." There was more but i don't want to put too much here. Site review and opinion: This is absolutely downgrading to receive a grade like this and to have someone else read a work as bad as this and ruin your reputation and overall average. The writers are not professional, more like middle schoolers! This is not considered to be "good" writing. The writer did not follow the instructions i provided of which i made very clear and expressed what i wanted the essay to have even things that are general knowledge of writing like overall structure of the essay and vocabulary...etc, just in case. I made the assignment very clear and also attached the original paper but it was NOT AT ALL followed. I also messaged the writer and told him/her they could have extra time just as long the paper is of good QUALITY but it was not. I tried my best to fix all the mistakes but i found myself reconstructing the entire essay and did not have any time left until class began and i had to hand it in. I had no time for revision request as the revision itself would take addition time! and i had non. This should be a wake up call for your service Ultius, Your pricing is illogical and over priced, you cans see that if you play around with the pricing and compare it. The writers are not professional in the anyway. They do not follow directions or ask any questions they might have just in case. After the writer submits it you guys at Ultius check it, and this is where the red flag should rise, the reviewer, that is anyone with a brain can clearly see all the mistakes being made if they take a simple 10-15 mins or even less. My suggestion would be to not take on an assignment unless you can absolutely perfect it given the requirements and timing otherwise you will get reviews like this. And to maybe not work with freelance writer since there is a more lack of carelessness. You have a moral and ethic responsibility given your service. This is a service that determines the grade a person will get and ties into the overall average. You are messing with peoples education and GRADES and this is not something to be taken lightly. You have to try and perfect every order with the person in mind. I made this review as logical as possible to make my point and not include misinformation, but i do feel absolutely horrible for the money and paid and what i got. I have been bothered by this for days since i go the paper and i have not be able to contact them or let alone leave a review since my semester is coming to a close and i have no time to waste at all!! But i would like my money back and than some for making me go through this. And logically speaking considering the conditions at hand i should get my money back and i will, otherwise i will contact my bank and take matters further than that if i have to. Its ironic that this writer does not know how to write.